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About Me Member New Artist itsonlylifeafterall17/Male/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 1 Year
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poem

Sun Jun 29, 2008, 12:27 PM
Green Eyed Liar


Green eyes lie,
Your hand sweeps such,
You craved my submission,
I craved your touch.

Your sweet, seductive stare,
I knew I was floored.
I wanted a kiss,
You wanted much more.

My cuts have taught me,
Those bitter tears.
Blood falls in drops,
I hide in childish fear.

I feel your stare,
It burns in my soul.
Evil green eyes,
Creating a hole.

I push all away,
Build a wall.
Scar those who get close,
Put fear in them all.

The blade shakes in my hand,
It’s pleasure is sweet.
Grief tingles my heart,
Blood falls to my feet.

Green eyes sin,
Beware the deviant liar.
He feels no remorse,
His soul like cold fire.

Can you help,
If I don’t let you in?
Fear is my flaw,
Pride is my sin.

Help never comes,
Hope never shines.
Joy is unreachable,
Bliss is a lie.

Your eyes tell me faux-truth,
My wall falls in reflex.
You lean in close,
Passioned lips do connect.

Hope still flees,
You’ll leave in the end.
Naiveties have I,
For the reverse I pretend.

Darkness wraps,
A strong embrace.
Where I should see his,
I there see your face.

Promises broken,
An unspeakable sin.
Seductive green eyes,
They pulled me in.

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Devious Info

  • Current Residence: you'd just love to find out
  • Interests: theatre, photography, cooking, photography, reading, photography, writing, did i mention photography
  • Favourite movie: tough one... probably Happy Endings
  • Favourite band or musician: always changing
  • Favourite genre of music: anything alternative to broadway to indie rock. i sample a little of everything
  • Favourite photographer: ME!!!!!!!! no i kid probably my friend's grandpa
  • Favourite style of art: photography or writing... don't care if you consider it art or not it is
  • MP3 player of choice: iPod
  • Personal Quote: if i let you go, can i ever have you back? Or will i be alone again?
  • Tools of the Trade: camera or pen and paper

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Comments


:iconunknown-ninja:
Hallo, and welcome to dA though it's kinda 3 days late, but ANYWAYS I really like your gallery, very cool. I hope you enjoy your time here and I know you will become known.

p.s. I really like the poem you put in your Journal. Very, very well written.

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'I don't hate you... I don't want to kill you... I just want to stay by your side... but the next time we meet... I might kill you...'

xoxoxo
Akasana

One of me bestiest friends ~lalalaAnime made my icon. OuO
:iconitsonlylifeafterall:
well thnk you very much
iput alot of work into these so that's really flattering

p.s. thanx about the poem
it won't let me submit it as a deviation for some reason so i put it as a journal
:iconunknown-ninja:
You're welcome. :D
Hehehe, well I was just telling the truth, they were really well done.
Well that's rude for dA to not let you submit it, it's so well written too. :tears:

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'I don't hate you... I don't want to kill you... I just want to stay by your side... but the next time we meet... I might kill you...'

xoxoxo
Akasana

One of me bestiest friends ~lalalaAnime made my icon. OuO
:iconunknown-ninja:
You're welcome, :D

--
'I don't hate you... I don't want to kill you... I just want to stay by your side... but the next time we meet... I might kill you...'

xoxoxo
Akasana

One of me bestiest friends ~lalalaAnime made my icon. OuO
:iconsilacaladhiel:
Hi, and welcome to DevArt! ^_^
If you feel alone, have questions, or simply want to talk with someone, just ask around. Most people are really nice here, really :)

I hope you have a great time, have a nice day, and see you around!

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Gotta do more, gotta be more.
~Dead Poets' Society

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